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FTE wrote: ↑Wed Feb 27, 2019 3:28 pm
I think the timebomb analogy totally works. The text layout is also really clean. What do you think about having the domain name somewhere?
I've got this saved as a draft, so I can still play around with it.
Are you thinking manontime.com or watchdealforum.com?
watchdealforum.com
Could also be separate from the design, like on the back of a hat or shirt
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I went ahead and pulled all the logos that have to do with time with their tagging system.
I dig it.
If I might make a suggestion, "ManOnTime" vs "Man On Time".
Actually used that suggestion to add the domain.
Also made the hour hand a little more prominent. That was bugging me.
Thoughts?
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FTE wrote: ↑Wed Feb 27, 2019 3:28 pm
I think the timebomb analogy totally works. The text layout is also really clean. What do you think about having the domain name somewhere?
I've got this saved as a draft, so I can still play around with it.
Are you thinking manontime.com or watchdealforum.com?
The latter.
I am pushing many of the site's references to that domain and will eventually have it replace manontime.com as where the site resolves to.
(manontime.com will then point to it.)
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ManOnTime wrote: ↑Wed Feb 27, 2019 3:53 pm
The latter.
I am pushing many of the site's references to that domain and will eventually have it replace manontime.com as where the site resolves to.
(manontime.com will then point to it.)
Let's try this one:
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Far and wide I will find 'em and I ride 'em
Bricks and mortar get my licks just for kicks
AD or authorized I don't analyze
Retail, wholesale never fail
Online or offline, I find I don't redefine
Too big to fail or yard sale they all hale
Run or hide just for fun deals I find
Never mind about that one above, it doesn't feel "balanced."
Round 4
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Far and wide I will find 'em and I ride 'em
Bricks and mortar get my licks just for kicks
AD or authorized I don't analyze
Retail, wholesale never fail
Online or offline, I find I don't redefine
Too big to fail or yard sale they all hale
Run or hide just for fun deals I find
TheJohnP wrote: ↑Wed Feb 27, 2019 4:09 pm
Never mind about that one above, it doesn't feel "balanced."
Round 4
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Wonder how a dollar sign as a hand would look instead of the fuse? That's something everyone would immediately get. Not sure if it would look good, though.
Is this a banner image? Or an advertisement that could be placed elsewhere? If banner image, then all you need is the site name and tag line. Website users don't need the URL because they are already on the website.
I was picturing more of a top banner image, personally.
Mostly I was playing around with a logo design site and really liked how it turned out. So figured I'd share.
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Far and wide I will find 'em and I ride 'em
Bricks and mortar get my licks just for kicks
AD or authorized I don't analyze
Retail, wholesale never fail
Online or offline, I find I don't redefine
Too big to fail or yard sale they all hale
Run or hide just for fun deals I find